This week I´m going to share my Quick-write with you. If you wonder when your reading this, I made it up. It is about a girl called Daniele, who I refer to as me, and the eventful times her city went through. ENJOY!!
Can you here... that explosion? ¨Daniele!¨ my mother called. Another bomb went off. The glass in my windows shattered from the force of the Bomb. Houses were lopsided, ours was tilting a bit too. I didn't want to be in it, when it tipped. Nor to be squashed by it. I freaked out as our house gave another jerk. ¨Ahh!¨ I screamed, as I fell sideways to under and out of the door way. That wasn't a bomb, so what was it? The ground gave another shudder. EARTHQUAKE!! I looked around, frantically for a place to cover me. There was nothing. I ran. I ducked under archways as I narrowly missing chandeliers crashed been under just minutes before came hing down on my head. Yikes, I thought as the archway I was under, minutes before, came crumbling down. ¨Daniele!¨ My mother called, more frantically this time. ¨Coming!¨ I called
I flew down a flight of stairs. Just as I reached the next flight of steps, another bomb went of.I started off down the stairs, but, as my foot hit the forth stair, it crumbled beneath me. ¨Ahh!¨ I screamed again as mybody plummeted down into the mattress cupboard. The word mattress echoed in my head. There was something I should remember about them, but what was it?POOF!! The mattress´s went as I landed on it. White stuffing exploded out of them as I sunk down. ¨That's it!¨ I said aloud, ¨Mattress´s are soft!¨
I climbed out of the cupboard to see my mother looking up at me from under her desk. Just then another earthquake hit. I stayed on my feet this time, but slid towards the open window. The force of the earthquake made me topple backwards, slightly. To much. I toppled out of the second story window. The last thing I saw was my mothers aghast face as I fell.
I hope you enjoyed my Quick-write. Thanks for Reading! Bye.
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